Thread:Jurassic Historian/@comment-24053170-20200626215710

You seriously need to work on your grammar.

I don't know what language your writing in, but its apparently not english.

I don't even know what I'm reading after you made those edits. because its so horrible that it no longer makes any sense and doesn't describe anything properly.

There are so many mistakes with your edit that reverting it all is the only plausible option.

If your going to make a change to the page, at least make it coherent to others. Because right now its not. 