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  • 15:28, May 2, 2017 (diff | hist) . . (+12)‎ . . m Episode XCVIII(Plot: Grammatical clarity. "She compliments his new appearance and getting his sword back" implies that she compliments the getting of his sword. "...for his new appearance and for getting the sword back," says Ashi compliments Jack.) (VisualEditor)
  • 15:22, May 2, 2017 (diff | hist) . . (+14)‎ . . Episode XCVIII(Fixed wording for grammatical clarity. "...due to a collapsing pillar from the struggle," is a bit vague. Considered "..a pillar collapsing from the struggle" but decided on "...a collapsing pillar that resulted from the struggle.") (VisualEditor)

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